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Relative Clauses
Master defining, non-defining, and reduced relative clauses to add detail, embed information, and create sophisticated noun phrases.
3 lessons · 18 exercises
Lessons
3Defining Relative Clauses: which, that, who, where
5 exercises · 30 min
Key structures
Noun + who/which/that + clause (defining — no commas)
Noun + Ø + clause (omitted pronoun: 'The book Ø I read')
Defining relative clauses — also called restrictive relative clauses — tell the reader exactly which noun you are talking about. Without the clause, the sentence either becomes unclear or changes its meaning entirely.
Consider the difference: 'Students who study abroad gain valuable experience' versus 'Students gain valuable experience.' The defining clause 'who study abroad' narrows the focus to a specific group. Remove it, and the sentence becomes too general. This is the core function of a defining clause: it identifies and restricts.
The main relative pronouns are 'who' (for people), 'which' (for things in formal writing), 'that' (for both people and things, but less formal), and 'where' (for places). In academic writing for IELTS and PTE, prefer 'which' over 'that' when referring to things — it reads as more formal and polished. However, 'that' is perfectly grammatical and is the only option after words like 'everything', 'something', or 'nothing'.
A crucial punctuation rule: defining relative clauses do NOT take commas. The clause is essential to the noun's identity, so nothing separates it. Compare: 'Policies that reduce emissions are popular' (defining — which policies? the ones that reduce emissions) with 'Policies, which reduce emissions, are popular' (non-defining — the writer assumes you already know which policies). This distinction will be explored in the next lesson.
One more useful feature is the contact clause. When the relative pronoun functions as the object of the clause, you can omit it entirely. 'The report that I read was insightful' becomes simply 'The report I read was insightful.' This is perfectly acceptable in academic writing and makes your sentences more concise.
Why does this matter for your score? IELTS examiners and PTE scoring algorithms assess grammatical range. If every sentence follows a simple subject-verb-object pattern, your score stalls around Band 5.5. Defining relative clauses let you embed information within a single sentence, demonstrating control of complex structures — a hallmark of Band 6.5 and above in Grammatical Range.
Students who achieve high scores in standardised tests do not necessarily perform better in real-world problem-solving scenarios.
The defining clause 'who achieve high scores in standardised tests' specifies exactly which students the writer is discussing. Without it, the sentence would claim something about all students — a very different argument. No commas are used because the clause is essential to identifying the noun.
The policies that governments implement to reduce carbon emissions often face fierce opposition from industrial lobbyists.
The defining clause 'that governments implement to reduce carbon emissions' narrows 'policies' to a specific category. The writer uses 'that', which is acceptable, though 'which' would be slightly more formal. The sentence demonstrates how relative clauses pack detail into a single sentence — valuable in IELTS essays where word count is limited.
Cities which rely heavily on fossil fuels face the greatest challenges in meeting international climate targets.
The defining clause 'which rely heavily on fossil fuels' identifies a subset of cities. The writer uses 'which' for a formal academic register. This sentence models a useful pattern for IELTS Task 2 discussion essays: [Noun] + which/that + [characteristic] + [claim].
A growing number of employers now value the practical skills that graduates acquire through internships and voluntary work.
Here 'that graduates acquire through internships and voluntary work' is a defining clause where 'that' functions as the object of 'acquire'. Because it is the object, the relative pronoun could be omitted: '...the practical skills graduates acquire through internships and voluntary work.' Both versions are correct in academic writing.
(Defining relative clauses do not take commas. The clause identifies which policies, so it is essential information that cannot be separated from the noun.)
(Do not add a redundant pronoun ('it') after the relative pronoun. 'Which' already fills the object role in the clause.)
(The verb in the relative clause must agree with the antecedent noun ('people' is plural), not with 'who'.)
(Do not insert a subject pronoun ('it') between a relative clause and the main verb. The noun and its relative clause form one subject unit.)
Exercises
1. Several countries have introduced strict emission regulations.
2. These countries report significantly lower levels of air pollution.
Noun + which + defining clause + main verb
Required connective: which
Governments invest heavily in renewable energy. These governments often experience long-term economic growth and improved public health.
Noun + which/who + defining clause + main verb
Non-Defining Relative Clauses: Adding Parenthetical Information
5 exercises · 30 min
Key structures
Noun, + who/which + clause, (non-defining — commas required)
Clause, + which + verb (refers to entire preceding idea)
Non-defining relative clauses add extra information about a noun that the reader can already identify. Unlike defining clauses, they do not change the sentence's core meaning — they simply provide additional detail.
Consider: 'Barcelona, which hosted the 1992 Olympics, attracts millions of tourists each year.' The reader already knows which city you mean — Barcelona. The relative clause adds a bonus fact. Remove it, and the sentence still makes complete sense: 'Barcelona attracts millions of tourists each year.' This is the key test: if the clause can be removed without losing the noun's identity, it is non-defining.
The punctuation is non-negotiable: non-defining clauses are always surrounded by commas. This signals to the reader — and to the examiner — that the information is parenthetical. Forgetting the commas changes the clause type entirely, which can alter meaning.
Two rules separate non-defining clauses from defining ones. First, you cannot use 'that' — only 'who' (for people), 'which' (for things), 'where' (for places), or 'whose' (for possession). Second, the relative pronoun can never be omitted, unlike in defining contact clauses.
There is a particularly powerful variation worth mastering: using 'which' to refer to an entire preceding clause, not just a single noun. For example: 'The government subsidised electric vehicles, which significantly reduced urban air pollution.' Here, 'which' refers to the whole idea of subsidising vehicles — not just to 'vehicles.' This structure is extremely useful in IELTS Task 2 and PTE Write Essay tasks when you want to add a consequence or comment on a point you have just made.
For your exam score, non-defining relative clauses demonstrate the ability to layer information elegantly. They show the examiner that you can add detail without writing a new sentence — a hallmark of Band 7 writing. Use them to include background facts, qualifications, or examples mid-sentence.
London, which has been a global financial centre for centuries, continues to attract multinational corporations seeking a European base.
The non-defining clause 'which has been a global financial centre for centuries' adds background information about London. The reader already knows which city is being discussed — the clause simply enriches the description. Commas on both sides are essential.
The government raised taxes on sugary drinks, which led to a measurable decline in consumption across all age groups.
Here 'which' refers to the entire preceding clause — the act of raising taxes — not just to 'sugary drinks.' This is one of the most useful structures in academic writing, as it allows you to state a cause and its effect in a single sentence. Note the comma before 'which'.
Marie Curie, who won two Nobel Prizes in different scientific disciplines, remains an enduring symbol of dedication to research.
The non-defining clause 'who won two Nobel Prizes in different scientific disciplines' adds a biographical detail about Marie Curie. Because she is already identified by name, the information is supplementary. The commas frame the extra detail without affecting the sentence's core meaning.
Renewable energy investment hit record levels in 2023, which many analysts attributed to falling technology costs and growing public concern about climate change.
'Which' refers to the entire preceding clause — the fact that investment hit record levels. The non-defining clause provides an explanation or attribution. This 'clause + comma + which + attribution' pattern is extremely common in academic writing and is useful for IELTS Task 1 descriptions of trends.
('That' cannot be used in non-defining relative clauses. Always use 'which' for things and 'who' for people in non-defining clauses.)
(Do not add a redundant subject pronoun ('she') inside a non-defining clause. 'Who' already functions as the subject of 'founded'.)
(Non-defining clauses must have a comma on BOTH sides. The closing comma after 'rise' is missing, which makes the sentence difficult to parse.)
Exercises
1. The city introduced a congestion charge in 2003.
2. This significantly reduced traffic volumes and improved air quality.
Clause, + which + verb (refers to entire preceding clause)
Required connective: which
Describe a well-known city of your choice, using non-defining relative clauses to include background information and interesting facts.
min: 50 words
max: 80 words
at least 2 non-defining relative clauses with correct comma placement
Reduced Relative Clauses for Conciseness
4 exercises · 30 min
Key structures
Noun + verb-ing / verb-ed (reduced from 'who/which + be + verb-ing/ed')
Students attending the lecture → Students who are attending the lecture
Reduced relative clauses are a powerful way to make your writing more concise and sophisticated. They remove unnecessary words — specifically the relative pronoun and the auxiliary verb — while preserving the full meaning.
The principle is straightforward. When a defining relative clause contains a form of 'be' followed by a participle (present or past), you can remove both the relative pronoun and 'be'. Compare: 'The students who are sitting in the front row' becomes 'The students sitting in the front row.' 'The policy that was introduced last year' becomes 'The policy introduced last year.' The reduced version is shorter, sharper, and more common in academic writing.
This works in several patterns. Active clauses with a present participle reduce easily: 'Factors that contribute to inflation' becomes 'Factors contributing to inflation.' Passive clauses reduce even more naturally: 'The data that was collected over ten years' becomes 'The data collected over ten years.' In both cases, the reduced form sounds more polished and professional.
However, reduction is not always possible. You cannot reduce a clause that contains a modal verb — 'Students who must attend the lecture' cannot become '*Students must attend the lecture' (the meaning changes entirely). You also cannot reduce when the verb has no 'be' auxiliary and is not in the simple present or past — 'The man who has three children' does not reduce neatly. The key question is: can you remove the relative pronoun and a form of 'be' without changing the meaning? If yes, reduce. If no, keep the full clause.
Why learn this for your exam? Examiners reward economy of expression. A paragraph that communicates the same ideas in fewer words — without sacrificing clarity — demonstrates Band 7-level control. Reduced relative clauses are one of the most reliable ways to achieve this. They are especially valuable in IELTS Task 1 process descriptions and PTE summaries, where conciseness directly affects your score.
The data collected during the five-year study revealed a strong correlation between air quality and respiratory illness.
This is a reduced defining clause. The full version would be 'The data that was collected during the five-year study.' By removing 'that was' and keeping the past participle 'collected', the sentence becomes more concise. The reduced form is standard in academic writing.
Students wishing to transfer to another programme must submit their application before the end of term.
Reduced from 'Students who wish to transfer to another programme.' The present participle 'wishing' replaces the full relative clause. This pattern is common in academic regulations, formal notices, and process descriptions — all relevant to IELTS Task 1 and PTE.
Factors contributing to urban overcrowding include population growth, rural-to-urban migration, and a shortage of affordable housing.
Reduced from 'Factors that contribute to urban overcrowding.' The present participle 'contributing' condenses the clause. This sentence also demonstrates effective parallel listing — a useful skill for IELTS Task 2 body paragraphs.
The report, commissioned by the Department of Health, recommended a complete ban on the advertising of junk food to children.
This is a reduced non-defining clause (the commas signal this). The full version would be 'The report, which was commissioned by the Department of Health, recommended...'. The past participle 'commissioned' replaces the full clause. Note that non-defining clauses can also be reduced — the commas remain.
(When reducing, remove the relative pronoun AND any auxiliary verb. Do not keep 'who' with a present participle — the reduction must remove the pronoun entirely.)
(Reduction is not possible when the relative clause contains a modal verb (must, should, can, etc.). You must keep the full relative clause with the pronoun.)
(When the noun receives the action (passive meaning), use the past participle, not the present participle. The report did not publish itself — it was published.)
Exercises
The policy that was introduced by the previous government has been overturned by the current administration.
Noun + past participle + phrase (reduced relative clause)
Universities, which have traditionally been seen as centres of academic excellence, are increasingly expected to prepare students for the modern workforce. Institutions offering vocational training alongside degree programmes have seen a significant rise in applications over the past decade. Graduates who complete these combined programmes tend to secure employment more quickly than those studying purely academic subjects. Research conducted by the Higher Education Statistics Agency in 2023 confirmed this trend, prompting several leading universities to redesign their curricula, which has required substantial investment in new facilities and staff training.
Unit Assessment
4Test your understanding of this unit before moving on.
1. The city introduced a congestion charge in 2019.
2. The congestion charge significantly reduced traffic volumes.
Required connective: which
Write a body paragraph (60–80 words) supporting the argument: 'Public libraries remain essential even in the digital age.'
min: 60 words
max: 80 words
at least 1 defining relative clause (no commas)
at least 1 non-defining or reduced relative clause